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Will and Jane Discuss Revision

Yes, my revised version of By Love Unveiled, which was first published in 1993 under the name of Deborah Martin, comes out tomorrow.

Just so you’ll know, here’s what I did in revising it:

  • Tightened up the writing (gee, I’ve learned a lot in 20 years; who knew?)
  • Made some of the motivations more believable (to me, anyway)
  • Corrected some historical inaccuracies (in my defense, there was no internet when I wrote the book, and it was hard to find books in New Orleans about the history of Restoration England)
  • Made the heroine a little less of a pushover (I didn’t realize how much of one she was until I read it again!)

What I did NOT do in revising it:

  • Make it a Sabrina Jeffries novel

Because I couldn’t. My SJ novels have a different focus, a different take on the world, and a different era as setting. To make my Deborah Martin book into a Sabrina Jeffries book, I’d have had to throw out everything and start over. Then I might as well have written a new SJ book!

With that said, it does have a dramatic story, with lots of sexual tension and more history than my SJ books. And as usual, it has an alpha hero. So I hope you’ll like it!

So how do you feel about writers revising their original works for publication? Will you buy more than one version of an author’s work?
Oh, and in celebration of my  new release, I will give one copy of the new book to one lucky commenter, whose name will be randomly drawn!

Written by Sabrina Jeffries

Sabrina Jeffries is the NYT bestselling author of a whole bunch of historical romance novels for Pocket Books and Avon Books, as well as a caffeine addict, Third Culture Kid, chocoholic, and jigsaw puzzle aficionado. Before writing as SJ, she wrote 8 historicals as Deborah Martin (now being revised and re-released) and 3 contemporary paranormal romantic suspense novels as Deborah Nicholas. Her 24th SJ book, WHAT THE DUKE DESIRES, will be out in June, and her first revised Deborah Martin re-release, BY LOVE UNVEILED, is out now!

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136 Comments on “Will and Jane Discuss Revision”

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  1. Amylynn Bright says:

    Since I’ve tracked down the original I’m excited to re-read with the revisions and see how it’s changed. Congratulations.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Thanks! As I said, not that many deep changes, because the “cosmetic” changes took me almost two months!

  2. Mary Preston says:

    I think it’s brave to re-vise an original. I think it’s wonderful to take your story & work to update it.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      We’ll go with that. I prefer “brave” to crazy, LOL!

  3. Sylvia says:

    I sometimes buy revised books, if I do not know the original. I do not think I would buy more than one version, unless it is very special to me.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      I’ve done it a few times. I have Judith McNaught’s revised Whitney, My Love, just because I was curious to see how she changed it. At the time I bought it, I liked both, but I would probably prefer the revised version now.

  4. Archer says:

    I like revisions because most old books are impossible to find and the 2nd hand can be expensive. Although I wouldn’t buy the revision if I had the original.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Some of the old book pricesl boggle my mind. They’ve got some of my old Deborah Nicholas books priced at $283 (for “new” books). The used ones are a penny, so I don’t know HOW they can justify THAT price. And I seriously doubt anybody’s paying that. Sheesh!

      1. Archer says:

        I totally agree.

  5. KellyProellocks says:

    I am more than happy to buy and read revised books.

  6. Connie Fischer says:

    If the original was a favorite read of mine, I would be very interested in reading the update. If I already owned a copy of the original, I probably would not buy the update unless I felt it was so much better than the original.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      I can understand that.

  7. Susan says:

    Congrats on the upcoming release, Sabrina :)

    I don’t have any experience of reading book revisions yet. Assuming I’d read the original before, I think I’d like to read a revised book for interest’s sake. As a piece of research to see what the author has changed. But then again I also think that the updated book would seem all “wrong” to me, especially if the old version was a beloved one. On the other hand, if I’d judged the original as flawed in some way, I think I’d appreciate an improved version.

    So I believe with me it would all depend on my original take on the first version.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      That makes sense. I see it as being like watching a remake of an old movie. Some remakes outshine the original. Some do not. I’m keeping my fingers crossed that this one does the latter!

  8. cail says:

    I always wonder how much the book has changed when it is rereleased! Thanks for letting us know.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      You’re welcome!

  9. LoriHandeland says:

    It’s always nice when a book is released again. Congrats.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Thanks, Lori. Have you ever revised an old book for publication?

  10. Sue K says:

    I have no problem reading a revised version of a book. Most of the timeI can’t tell what’s been revised.
    Congratulations on the re-release, Sabrina.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Thanks, Sue!

  11. Amanda says:

    I didn’t discover you until you were SJ, so I would probably buy this book. I like revisions because what we were reading in 93 is totally different than what we read today.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Boy, is THAT ever true!

  12. kez says:

    I would buy/read the re-release if I did not own the original book. Because of my ocd I KNOW I would sit down with both and underline the changes – just to know what you did! I think that would take the enjoyment out of book!

    Congrats on the re-release! Tomorrow can’t come soon enough.. :)

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      That would definitely not be fun!

  13. Liz B. says:

    I think I would buy a revised work. If the book was a favorite I don’t know if I would, I might be disappointed with the results, but I would be interested in reading the updated version. I love re-releases though because it allows you to get a look at backlist stories you may not have been able to find before. Sometimes you just love a book, flabby writing and all and, even if the revised result is better, you’ll always love the original. The changes you’ve made seem like they would do nothing but improve the work though. Better motivations and tighter writing, I can totally understand the urge to do it, some of the things I wrote even 10 years ago are almost painful to read now. I’ll pick this one up probably and I’m looking forward to reading something slightly different from you. Thanks!

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Hope you enjoy it, Liz! I hope I’ve improved it. It’s hard for me to step back and look at it. I agree, though, that there are some of my old books by other authors that I wouldn’t want touched. On the other hand, there are some that could really use revising!

  14. Stefanie D says:

    I think it´s great when authors revise their books. I wouldn´t buy two versions of the same book, but if I didn´t have the book yet I would buy the revised version.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      That seems to be the consensus!

  15. Emily Smith says:

    I never got a chance to read the original, but I have fallen in love with everything you’ve ever written and I’m sure this will be no different. I cannot wait to read By Love Unveiled!

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Aww, thanks! Hope it isn’t TOO different from my SJ stuff for you!

  16. Kathleen O says:

    I don’t mind them revising their work. But I like to know ahead of time that this is a book that what reissued and updated… I hate staring into a book and then realizing that I have read it all before, well not the updates, but the story and characters…

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      I agree. That’s why I was adamant about making sure my publisher made it very clear that it was a revised reissue.

  17. Carol A. Strickland says:

    So good to know this is allowed!

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Well, we’ll see how well readers like it. If it doesn’t go over well, this may be the last one. *G*

  18. Barbara Samuel says:

    Congrats on the re-vision & re-release.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Thanks, Barbara!

  19. Kelly Tinder says:

    I guess it depends on the book and the author. If I enjoyed the original a lot, I would want to read the new version too. Also, if the author is a favorite of mine, I like to read everything they write and would take an interest in the revision. I do own your earlier work and yes, would love to read the revised version. We actually talked about this a little when I met you last year in Chicago :)

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Glad you’re interested in seeing it. I would love to have done more with it, but I just didn’t have the time!

  20. Julie says:

    Congratulations on the release! I like the revisions–my puzzle minded brain likes to try to find the differences. :)

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      I’m like that, too.

  21. Kelly Ryan Watson says:

    As long as I like the author I will buy anything that they put out there! So bring it! :)

  22. Gretchen says:

    I think if I knew it was a revision, I’d need to read the original too, just out of curiosity to see what changed. I will probably appreciate the improvements to historical accuracy, as that is something that really bothers me when I know a detail is wrong.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      For me, errors in historical accuracy don’t necessarily break a book, but if I KNOW that something is blatantly wrong, it can really irritate me.

  23. AmyS says:

    If I really enjoyed the original then I probably wouldn’t read a revised version. If I wasn’t wowed with the original then I would love to see what changes the author made.

    I have been looking for Deborah Martin books in the UBS, but haven’t been able to find any, so I am looking forward to reading By Love Unveiled.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      I think the DM books are probably getting harder to find, since they’re mostly 20 years old. Hope you enjoy this version!

  24. Emily says:

    I’m really looking forward to reading your revised edition. Thank you for all the work you put into writing.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Thank YOU for reading my hard work!

  25. Linda says:

    If I’d read the original I’d probably not read a revised version (or vice versa).

    I think it’s quite a good idea to rewrite a 20year old story. I’m sure lots of your fans wouldn’t have read the book (me for one!) & would enjoy a more “modern” take of the story. Ironic isn’t it? A modern historical :p

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Well, it’s “modern” in the sense that it’s faster-paced and the narrative style is a bit more typical of my style now. Books were just so different then; people had more time to wallow in them. Not so much, anymore. I cut nearly a third of the original off of it without really trying. Scary!

  26. Haley says:

    I’m always willing to give a re-released book a shot–especially if the original was written 20 years prior! Good luck with your release, I hope it’s a smashing success!

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Thanks! Me, too!

  27. Julia London says:

    I don’t know when I would have time to go back and revise an old one.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      It was really hard to work it in, I must confess. We’ll see if it was worth it. :-) I’m terrified that readers won’t like it.

  28. Kendall Ziegler says:

    I love all of your books! I am looking for to reading your revised book. It doesn’t matter to me if it is revised or not as long as it is good.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Then I hope it proves to be good! :-)

  29. Heather Cathrall says:

    Oh how fun! that comic strip made me laugh out loud! If it was a favorite book of mine, then yes, I would buy a revision. But for most books I would not bother. It would have to be a book I really loved. If Sabrina Jeffries revised one of the Hellions books or the Heiresses books, then yes, I do think I would buy and read the updated version. I do love those stories so much and I think they are the kind of stories that the reader would learn more with a second re-read anyway since after reading both series there are so many more pieces that fall into place.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      I hope to never be revising my SJ books, but you never know. Ten years from now, I might think about it!

  30. Angela B says:

    I think it’s a good thing to go back and revisit older works and if you think they need a revision go ahead and do it.

    If I loved the story the first time and nothing that made me love it changes I would get both versions.

    You’ve got me interested so I think I will check out the original from the library.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Just keep in mind that the original is VERY long!

  31. Maria P says:

    I think that it’s only appropriate if the writer feels that the revision is necessary; if it’s someone else’s idea, then the integrity of the writer would be compromised. I, myself, am usually a fan of originals!

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Trust me, my publisher would probably have been happy to publish it as is. I wouldn’t have, though.

  32. Heather W. says:

    It would be interesting to read the update and see how it compares to the original. It’s great that you took the time to do this!

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      I hope it appeals to people!

  33. Karen H in NC says:

    I have a copy of the original book that is sitting on my ever growing TBR shelves…and guess what? It’s still waiting to be read! Don’t know how long I’ve had it but it has been a while. Guess I’ll pull that one out and read it next.

    I don’t mind an author doing a reissue of a book that may or may not include re-writing and/or re-vamping…as long as the title stays the same. I have bought at least 4 books by one particular author and what I thought were 4 different titles only to find out later that they were 2 books each with a new title and no re-write involved…just a title change. That upset me and that author was scratched from my BTB list and TBR shelf.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Yes, that annoys me, too. Which is why I made SURE that they were clear about it on my cover.

      They’re also going to be doing Silver Deceptions, and since I HATE that title, the title may change, but I’ll make sure it’s clear on the cover that it’s a reissue.

      That’s why they change the titles sometimes, you know. It’s not to “fool” you. It’s to make the titles better and more marketable.

  34. Edea Baldwin says:

    First of all, I agree with Jane about Classis Illustrated versions. I had a wonderful collection and knew the plots of so many great books when I was quite young. Secondly, I consider it a very audaciously brave thing to do to revisit an old work and rework elements to update it for a new audience. Kudos!

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Thanks! Yes, I read lots of those Classics Illustrated Comics when I was a kid. But I don’t remember ever seeing Hamlet!

  35. evlqn says:

    I am okay with an author going in and making revisions on a book because many times that book needed more depth anyway. Loss ends can be tied up or more information about the characters can be given, and sometimes the characters need a change in attitude. I don’t think I have ever been disappointed by revisions.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Good to know!

  36. CateS says:

    I’d read a revised if it had been a number of years… just to see how it had changed.. I can see where the inaccuracies would kinda irk the author given the research scope via the internet/online libraries and so on..

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Yes, those inaccuracies really bug me, it’s true!

  37. Aretha z says:

    Hi Sabrina I am open minded with authors who revise their work and yes sometimes I prefer the revised version :) . Cheers Aretha

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Thanks for your input, Aretha!

  38. LSUReader says:

    I like it when my favorite authors revise and re-release older works. I’m looking forward to reading By Love Unveiled.

    I love the new Will and Jane adventure. It reminded me of how much I enjoyed those old illustrated classic comics!

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      I used to love those comics, too.

  39. Bonnie H says:

    Congratulations on By Love Unveiled! If I did not have the original book, I would definitely buy the revised edition. It was interesting to hear how you revised the original.

  40. dbrown3400 says:

    As always, Will and Jane are entertaining. Their antics make me laugh.

    I’ve been disappointed with revisions in the past, especially when Jude Deveraux changed the ending to A Knight in Shining Armor. I was perfectly happy with the first ending. The second, not so much. But I will pick up my fave authors books and read the original and the revised, just to get the feel for both. Usually I’m okay with them.

    Good luck with By Love Unveiled.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Ooh, I didn’t know that Jude Devereaux had ever changed the ending! Did she make it be him in the flesh?

      I never had a problem with the original ending either, but a lot of people did.

    2. evlqn says:

      Deveraux changed the ending? Any idea why she would do that? Since I have the original I never felt the need to get another copy. I don’t know how I would feel about that. I might have to get a copy just to see how I like it. Maybe her reasons were similar to Sabrina’s and she felt she could do somethings better.

  41. Patsi says:

    Oh how I love your Will and Jane adventures…. Happy Re-release Day. By Love Unveiled will be a New book for me. I might have to look for the Older book to compare.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      So glad you enjoy Will and Jane! And thanks for buying By Love Unveiled, too. I really appreciate it.

  42. Cheri Champagne says:

    Congratulations on your rerelease!

    I don’t mind, but I will usually only buy one copy of the book in paperback. Other copies would be bought as an ebook, despite my preference for paperbacks.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      That makes perfect sense to me!

  43. Cerian Halford says:

    I like it when older books are revised and rereleased, a lot of the time I’ve not heard of the early books- so for me it’s just like discovering a new book!

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      That’s why I like it, too.

  44. Rachel Gibson says:

    I’m kind of torn on this one. If it’s to correct mistakes or inaccuracies, then I guess it’s okay. If it was a favorite book by a fav author, I’d probably be upset and wouldn’t buy the revised addition. It would be like Da Vinci going back and putting a big smile on the Mona Lisa. It changes what I like about it.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      I guess I like to see what the author comes up with. But then, I also enjoy seeing many different versions of a work, too.

  45. Kathleen McCluskey says:

    Love the idea of Will upset over changing his work.I guess he did not see Shakespeare in Love

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      That would probably send him over the edge!! I loved that movie. I have it on DVD.

  46. may says:

    I don’t mind revisions… It’ll be fun…

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      I sure hope so, LOL!

  47. jackie frye says:

    If is an author I like, yes, I buy revised editions. I frequently reread books I like so a revised edition sorta falls into the reread catagory.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      I do a lot of rereading myself, although I tend to just pick certain passages.

  48. Sonny says:

    I like this idea. Previous published books were good for their era (a pushover heroine was the normal several years ago) and to update to fit audiences today only improves on what was already a great read. Yeah, writers, go for it!

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Thanks! I am! :-)

  49. Sheridan says:

    I haven’t really run into any revisions of a beloved book yet… I would probably get it and read both back to back to see what was different :)

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      I’ve only seen a couple, but I found it interesting.

  50. Sara M. says:

    Since I’ve read “The Hobbit” over and over again, I can safely say I enjoy revised works. Tolkien changed it while he was writing “Lord of the Rings” to make certain scenes more believable. If I suddenly became a millionaire, I might seek out the original version, but for now I must be content to read the revised version.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      I didn’t know that about the Hobbit!! How interesting.

  51. andy says:

    Have the old one love it have read all your DM books and own them
    but was not happy with a rewite of another Author book

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Sometimes it probably doesn’t turn out well. I like to think that my rewrite improved the book, but some readers might not agree!

      And thanks for buying all the old DM books.

  52. Marcy Shuler says:

    I’d buy a revised book, especially if I missed out on the original. I don’t know how likely I’d buy another if I did have the original though.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Well, in my case, we figured a LOT of readers had never come across them, since the books are so old. So it seemed worth doing it.

  53. Christina Humble says:

    I don’t mind a revision as long as, like you said, the entire focus doesn’t change. Not enough change to drive you nuts, but enough change to see the whole picture a little better.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Good distinction to make! No, the entire focus doesn’t change; that would be too hard!

  54. Janae says:

    I don’t mind revisions. I think it’s a problem if it’s complete re-write and sold as the same thing. Congratulations and Happy Re-Releas Day!

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Thanks, Janae!

  55. bn100 says:

    Might buy a revised copy if I never read the original

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      That makes sense.

  56. Karen says:

    If I’ve read the original book, I don’t want a revision. Since I’ve not read DM book, I plan to buy it. IMO, in original books it is interesting in that I can read how the author has changed/improved/worsen in following books.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      That’s true. You can still tell that in this, since the bones and meat of the story are the same. It’s definitely NOT one of my SJ books.

  57. Chelsea B. says:

    I think it’s great! Especially if that particular novel has been out of print for awhile. It will give new fans a chance to read it for the first time, and old fans a chance to re-read with a pretty new cover!

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      That cover IS pretty, isn’t it? I was so pleased when they sent it to me.

  58. Belinda says:

    Revisions are so much better and thanks for great book. Would like to read!

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Thanks, Belinda!

  59. Alisa says:

    I think its great if you get a chance to revise your work. You can only make it better and sales better too. Plus if you revise it, more people are likely to pick it up thinking it is a New Book. you have newer readers now than when it was first published, so in my opinion it doesn’t hurt at all.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      I hope you’re right!

  60. Cindy A says:

    I like revisions and those books that were too short and were filled out by a stronger story and characterizations. I like knowing it was a revision and NOT a new book. That seems like cheating.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Well, this one went from too long to shorter but better (I hope). Yes, I do think readers should always be informed that a book is not new.

  61. Barbara Elness says:

    I think it’s fine for an author to revise previously published work if they feel they can improve on the original. I probably wouldn’t buy another version if I’d already read one though, I would assume the basic story is the same.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Yes, the basic story is definitely the same. I do think I improved on the original, though. At least I hope I did!

  62. Freshechelle says:

    Ooh this is so cool. I thought it was a re-release, forgot that it was a revision.

    I bought some of your old books last year but haven’t read them yet. I assume, like all of us, your talent improves with experience, therefore I think it’s swell that you go back apply what you’ve mastered to a story line that’s your creation.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Thanks, Fresh! You should probably read the newer version, if you’re going to read them. *G*

    2. Freshechelle says:

      Great Will & Jane episode.

  63. TinaF says:

    Congrats, hope I can find it in the box store tomorrow.

    I have read revised stories before and had no problem, I just like to know that it has been revised.

    What I dislike is re-releases with a different cover. I always check the copyright date on books. If it is more than a year old, I probably already have it. I’ll go home and check my excel document of the author. Sometimes it will be a book that I’m missing and I’ll pick it up the next time I’m at the box store.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      I hope you can find it, too! I don’t know how many copies will be out there, frankly.

  64. Quilt Lady says:

    It would interesting to read both versions to compare the two.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      Feel free to do that! :-)

  65. JessS says:

    I don’t think I’ve ever really come across authors revising their books. Rereasing sure but not really changing. I’d be curious to see how it goes, but generally if I already had the first copy of the book I’d probably be a little bit annoyed at having to buy another one. So it’s probably good for situations like yours where the book’s kind of old, so revising it means that a new audience can read it.

    1. Sabrina Jeffries says:

      I don’t think I would revise any of my more recent books. This is as much about reaching an audience who never read them as it is about revising them. But I wasn’t going to let them be published as is.

  66. Charlene says:

    I am happy to read a revision of a book. In this case, I haven’t read it yet, since I discovered your books a few years ago.

  67. E.R. says:

    Actually, if the “integrity” of the book remains “untouched”, I’m all for it. I hate those pesky little grammar/spelling errors that were missed, so if they were fixed in the revised version, I’ll be happy. Also, some revisions are probably necessary, given that said errors may not had been noticed by the author/editor/etc. so it should be fixed. Even adding some “deleted” scenes or something to “flesh it out” and make the story “complete” is also good in my eyes.

    If the books are from my fave authors, or said books are faves of mine, then I’ll buy the revised version, just so that I have the copy of it.

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